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Serena Junior Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 47 |
Written: November 6, 2004 Title: SNOW (MY BLANKET) Sitting by the window Watching the snow dance Fall Touch The ground softly. A gentle caress. White and pale, a blanket. Covering the naked earth. No longer exposed the dead grass and trees safe surrounded secured under a blanket of ice white snow. Ice blue eyes Cold white smile. No more lies. Let it dance touch the ground.. caress...the ground bare and naked, exposed. the snow... I am alone at the window. Clutching myself, holding on to me pretending that it is you.. my blanket of snow. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have rarely seen snow so I love poems about it this is good...I love that ending |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Serena Junior Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 47 |
thank you both. Where I live snow is often enough, I wish I could send some your way lol. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Nicely done Serena. I enjoyed it. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The thought of snow is deliciously enticing in this sauna I call home. I enjoyed the reprieve of this reverie very much.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
amazing what a snow write can do in mid summer cool write, very cooling effect welcome! |
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