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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-07-06 12:20 PM


Light of Color

The light that shines so sweet and bright
I place my palette every night
The colors of a prisms break
Fills my brush in sweeps of wake

It dabs the magic that I dream
A field of green a running stream
Of trees and flowers growing hope
It is the fiber of my cope

Its here I bring the world to peace
Its here I dance in free caprice
Its here my paintings fill the glade
Its here my soul does find its shade

And in the interim of life
With all its pain and all its strife
I paint that with the color grime
And add to it a PS time

I know naught, before or after
But have known a little laughter


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-07-06 01:25 PM



And you've shared your
miles of smiles with all...

a delightful read, our Sy!




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2 posted 2006-07-06 01:26 PM


AdorableSeymour~

'Its here I bring the world to peace
Its here I dance in free caprice
Its here my paintings fill the glade
Its here my soul does find its shade'


You word-dance us, so masterfully, through the beauty~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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JL
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3 posted 2006-07-06 01:33 PM


Very nice read indeed!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-07-06 02:01 PM


Sunshine
Thank you love.

Marge,
Thank you sweety.

JL
Indeed thats what I need.

Rick
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5 posted 2006-07-09 02:33 AM


Seymour, you paint a wonderful colour my friend, I really enjoyed this piece, thank you for sharing.

Sincerely
Rick

passing shadows
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6 posted 2006-07-09 07:25 AM


morning Sy

lovely write, I missed this earlier and was wondering where you were...


scorpio
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7 posted 2006-07-09 09:04 AM


A lyrical write this morning Sy.  Much enjoyed!

believe in what your heart feels...

Margherita
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8 posted 2006-07-09 10:02 AM


quote:
Its here I bring the world to peace
Its here I dance in free caprice
Its here my paintings fill the glade
Its here my soul does find its shade



"Light of Color" promised well and what you did with your pen, dear Seymour, is such a delight to read and to feel in the heart.

Go on dancing in free caprice ... I join you!

Wonderful.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

divine chaos
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9 posted 2006-07-09 11:48 AM


I'm so glad I found this little corner of the 'net while I was surfing aimlessly today.  What a wonderful talent for word-weaving you have! Thank you for sharing

~*divine chaos*~

The artist is nothing without the gift,
but the gift is nothing without work."
- Emile Zola (1840-1902)

The Lady
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10 posted 2006-07-09 04:05 PM




"The colors of a prisms break
Fills my brush in sweeps of wake"

Lovely Sir!


jody5
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11 posted 2006-07-09 04:25 PM


Standing Ovation.  I am in agreement with everyone else.  Your creativity  as a poet shows like that of a painter and sounds like a lyric.  Much enjoyed.

Hugs Kimberly


Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2006-07-10 10:19 AM


Rick
Thank you for the read and reply.

passing,
I'm always with you sweet.

scorpio
Much enjoy your comments.

Margherita
My pleasure to dance with you.

Lady
Thank you sweety.

jody5
Couldn't ask for a nicer reply, thank you.

SmartChick
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13 posted 2006-07-11 07:48 PM


And, when I read your beautiful poetry, you make me dance right along with you.
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2006-07-11 09:00 PM


SmartChick
I love when you dance along with me.

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