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XOx Uriah xOX
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0 posted 2006-07-10 02:01 PM



      One should have no fear of Death
   But the fear of Death should be feared
    Your final thought upon final breath
  Sets the course to which birth is steered
    The subtotal of all you truly believe
  is expressed in the last thought you give
This determines where one goes when they leave
And the next life through which they must live

© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-07-10 02:47 PM


AMEN!
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2 posted 2006-07-10 08:17 PM


wow!
Debo
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3 posted 2006-07-11 12:42 PM


Beautifully said

Debo

Enchantress
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4 posted 2006-07-11 01:42 PM


YES!!  My feelings on this exactly!
Hugs~Nancy

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2006-07-11 02:10 PM


Uriah,
Do you have it in writing LOL. Enjoyed the read.

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-07-11 04:03 PM



Amazing Uriah!

aziza
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7 posted 2006-07-12 11:46 PM


Pretty thought-provoking stuff here.  I don't have anything profound to add, just that I really like this poem a lot.  Thank you.

aziza

iliana
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8 posted 2006-07-15 04:19 AM


I will definitely bear that in mind, Larry!  Thanks for the insight.  *hugs*....jo
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