Open Poetry #38 |
The Search (to all you PiPsters) |
divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Caught in a writer's block I roamed in search of my last muse, who had left home I looked out at the corner store They said they hadn't seen her The store clerk gave me a weird look Geez, he's such a weiner I wandered while I pondered where could she be, oh where?! then it hit me to check Ebay whatever "IT" is, you'll find "IT" there. Alas, I didn't find her there No more ideas up my sleeve But she didn't disappear into thin air -- Oh, I know!I'll Ask Jeeves The butler was a little stuffy And he wasn't very helpful I thought, "maybe I can Google her," But even that was doubtful I Googled, and I Googled and I clicked through every forum and one day I tripped right into one with the most fantastic poems I read, commented, smiled and wept As off the screen the words just leapt The images they brought to view were in infinite colors, in every hue For just a bit, I abandoned my search And in the pages my soul set sail and I waved to an Angel of the Earth As she swung by on a comet's tail I basked in the glow of Midnite Sun Where the mute had found his voice HopeS of Sunshine filled my thoughts And did my lonely heart rejoice! Passing shadows and naked thoughts Do still dance within my view But a poet's not a poet without a few Dark Strangers or Shadows in Blue I found an Enchantress' fairy picking flowers, and some dandy Grandie Girlies who, for dad, were pouting prettily Eyes shining with luminosity How surprised was I to realize, As the pages I went through Revealed what I was searching for, My missing muses were here with you! If within my simple penning Your name you do not find It isn't that you haven't touched me I've just run out of time! Work says it's time to end this rhyme One more stanza and I'm through To the PiPsters, one and all, Say my muses and I, "Thank YOU!" |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So cute and wonderful rhyme , sending smiles across the miles Hope |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sheli~ How clever, clever, clever~ And not just because I know those Grandie Girlies upclose and personal~ 'I found an Enchantress' fairy picking flowers, and some dandy Grandie Girlies who, for dad, were pouting prettily Eyes shining with luminosity' But ... you put us in sweet Enchantress' garden and made sure our dear Luminosity was there too~ Makes for a wonderful way to untie the ink of that muse of yours~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"For just a bit, I abandoned my search And in the pages my soul set sail and I waved to an Angel of the Earth As she swung by on a comet's tail" It appears that your muse is in full swing! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
/main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=2&topic=000631 I am sure that at one time or another, dear Poet, several of us have come in to say "Thanks, Ron, for giving us Passions!" While we had passion all along, little did we know the community of poets that we would find... all within blue halls... So, dear DC...thank YOU for going on the Search! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I found an Enchantress' fairy picking flowers, and some dandy Grandie Girlies who, for dad, were pouting prettily Eyes shining with luminosity" How delightful! You are so very clever! Well done indeed~Hugs, Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Were all in agreement here. Very cleaver and wisely put together. Much enjoyed. Hugs Kimberly |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Sheli this sure made me smile I'm glad you've found PIP and I'm keeping this one in my library |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
lol...[^_^]Very creative and entertaining.I myself am glad that I've found this site created by the great man that is Ron. ~J. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Cute one, much enjoyed. Something going on here with muses...seems this must be muse take a week off week.... |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Aww, this is very awesome! Welcome to passions my friend! I am glad you enjoy this sight. I remember when I first saw it, I was awestruck. Muse all you like. I will be glad to read your words. Kristabell |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Thankies for all your kind comments, y'all have given such inspiration For years my lamenting muse was the only one hanging around, it's sheer bliss to be able to express thoughts not born of depression for the first time in what seems like a lifetime. So, I wrote this to thank you all for just -- being. ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When we share this feeling... it is mulitplied beyond planes, Sheli... write on! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I find my muse here too Sheli. Thanks for this! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Much enjoyed, Sheli. I know exactly how you feel. I remember the first time I entered this garden of poets and the art, beauty and warm welcome I found from many, many poets who have become very good friends. I am here till beyond the day I die. - Owl |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Cute and clever! Much enjoyed this......jo |
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