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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
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Watertown, NY

0 posted 2006-07-09 07:51 PM


I pity you
For envying me
You want it all
Every damn thing
And you think you’ve won
But you’re sadly blinded
And refuse to see
That I’m giving it up
All that I am
Only because I’ve grown
Matured passed this
A childish game
I know it all
The tricks of the trade
So you can’t fool me
You can’t win
I’ve surpassed you
In more ways than one
And though you think you’re better
I know you’ve only begun
I could take it all
And break you
As easily as I’ve made you
So don’t underestimate me
For it is you Sweetie
Who remains a puppet on a string

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

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the_girl_next_door
Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
USA
1 posted 2006-07-09 09:36 PM


Another Great post..

~heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-07-10 02:18 AM


Wow, so powerful and I have lived it.  Thanks for expressing what I have felt so many times!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2006-07-10 06:49 AM


yes!
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2006-07-10 10:44 AM


wow, what a stands...
confidence floods in this wonderful write

deasomnians
Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 87
California
5 posted 2006-07-11 02:51 PM


Harsh but necessary. But be careful of the power jealousy yields...

-Katie

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2006-07-11 03:12 PM


No one could call you a shrinking violet! You are a mighty sunflower!

Love & Light,
EA

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
7 posted 2006-07-11 03:28 PM


I know it all
The tricks of the trade
So you can’t fool me
You can’t win
I’ve surpassed you


love that~~

M

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