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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2006-07-09 05:35 AM

sssshhhhhhhhhh

she's singing -

if you dare to call it that--

it's more like she is full of paint

and flings it from her fingertips

and out the ends of hair unkempt

as her lips curl up disgust

that she is so vulnerable

and no

she cannot ever trust

the half moons of her eyes explain

it's just about her pain

and you

are just the witness victim of

the circumstance

of this event

drawn like boils

by the salve

that y'mama once called "love"

and bliss

was fingers on the brow,

as she remembers "it"

she spits

howling like a darkling child

that gypsies had refused

she is

plucking leaves and sticks

from skin

naked in the wood...

she is

constancy of born again

wailing wailing

nailing truth

like a proclamation of

the elders

in a heathen skull

with lessons to be learned

and burned

into the eyes of innocents.

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

1 posted 2006-07-09 06:08 AM

morning hugs to you

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-07-09 08:44 AM

the thing about this,
is that

she most definitely

is.

miss you.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2006-07-09 10:28 AM

quote:
like a proclamation of

the elders

in a heathen skull

with lessons to be learned

and burned

into the eyes of innocents.

Such incredibly powerful words, dear Karen.

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-07-09 04:31 PM

"she spits

howling like a darkling child

that gypsies had refused"

Dang serenity! How do you do that?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-07-09 06:56 PM

exactly
only from your muse,
does spit shine

love the heartsong

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2006-07-10 01:58 AM

Wow Karen! How DO you get Dark to be so Brilliant? As most often is the case, Kate's favourite lines are mine too. If you were to sell your pen, you would be a millionaire!

- Owl

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2006-07-10 02:54 AM

I love her! She is truly an artist extraordinaire! And, Ser, I love this poem about her....I hope someone sends her a copy of it; I think it would make her giggle that wonderful giggle of hers. Brava for you.......jojo

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2006-07-10 02:54 AM

I love her! She is truly an artist extraordinaire! And, Ser, I love this poem about her....I hope someone sends her a copy of it; I think it would make her giggle that wonderful giggle of hers. Brava for you.......jojo

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2006-07-10 12:50 PM

You sure nailed her, at least the one I see and hear. I love her K, she is all this and more, and you need to be still to take it all in, and savor her art. Well done.

quote:

she is

constancy of born again

wailing wailing

nailing truth

like a proclamation of

the elders

in a heathen skull

with lessons to be learned

and burned

into the eyes of innocents.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2006-07-10 02:49 PM

Serene One, your words must have tentacles on them because they reach out and grab a reader's attention! ~ Or perhaps they have little hooks that enable you to draw a reader in! ~ All your poetic works are captivating.

Sending you a hug of love,
Linda

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2006-07-10 03:00 PM

your words are a monolithic spiritulism
a legacy defined by you embodied beauty

I don't know who this attributes, and thus raises the spectre of the promise of friendship...

Wonderful poetry Lady...
miss reading you whole bunches

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

12 posted 2006-07-10 06:38 PM

Thank you all for being so sweet, and making feel so welcome.

I'm afraid my time is limited of late, so I appreciate your understanding.

Love to all.

Serena
Junior Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 47

13 posted 2006-07-10 07:15 PM

she isn't the only one flinging paint from her fingertips.. I must say you just did a very good job of flinging paint from your fingertips to paint this picture and share it. Excellent read, I realize loved the imagry, and the ideas presented here.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2006-07-10 07:32 PM

Nice writing...James

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

15 posted 2006-07-10 08:51 PM

and Owl?

I happen to have a pen for sale.

thank you

and added thanx to Serena and James.

and btw? I didn't know how to do the double dot thingie to properly spell her name.

grin

so much for "genius"

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

16 posted 2006-07-11 12:17 PM

Hint serenity:

Go to someplace else on the web and copy and paste.

Björk

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