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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-07-08 11:31 PM



Like the glorious feathered tail
of some fancy strutting peacock,
the clouds tonight raced by,
splashing themselves in brilliance
as fast winds aloft pushed them by
upon a cobalt canvas sky.

And as I stood, staring
beyond the visible horizon
and into the vast beyond,
the clouds carried my mind
aloft for a free ride
on Nature's glorytrain,
and into the realm
of a sweet refrain:

~Praised be Life~
~Namaste~Namaste~
~Praised be Life~

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2006-07-09 12:31 PM


Elegant calm...wonderful picture Kacy.
TD

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2 posted 2006-07-09 03:13 AM


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beautiful
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4 posted 2006-07-09 08:51 AM



Namaste.

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5 posted 2006-07-09 09:09 AM



May it ever linger


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6 posted 2006-07-09 09:28 AM


Nameste, Kacy!  
Margherita
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7 posted 2006-07-09 09:47 AM


quote:
Like the glorious feathered tail
of some fancy strutting peacock,
the clouds tonight raced by,
splashing themselves in brilliance
as fast winds aloft pushed them by
upon a cobalt canvas sky.

And as I stood, staring
beyond the visible horizon
and into the vast beyond,
the clouds carried my mind
aloft for a free ride
on Nature's glorytrain,
and into the realm
of a sweet refrain:

~Praised be Life~
~Namaste~Namaste~
~Praised be Life~



Gorgeous, dear Kacy!

Praised be Life indeed!!

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2006-07-09 11:58 AM


*******************
the clouds carried my mind
aloft for a free ride
on Nature's glorytrain,
and into the realm
of a sweet refrain:
*******************

I love these lines, absolutely fantabulous!

divine

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9 posted 2006-07-09 12:39 PM


"aloft for a free ride
on Nature's glorytrain,
and into the realm
of a sweet refrain:"


B E A U T I F U L!  

It paints such a pretty scene.

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10 posted 2006-07-09 02:45 PM


::smiles::    satchitananda    shanti    namaste    
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11 posted 2006-07-09 02:46 PM


Kacy~
How pretty this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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12 posted 2006-07-10 11:14 PM


a lovely vision
it be
very uplifting and hopeful

Midnitesun
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13 posted 2006-07-11 12:16 PM


to each of you a huge thanks!
It was an awesome sky scene that wrote itself.

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