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Open Poetry #38

Dreams

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2006-07-08 07:04 AM

You came along and saw me,
And held me in your arms
You kissed me with your sweet soft lips
I felt safe in your arms
But to me you're just a dream while i'm waiting to awake
Then I'll face another day, destiny deciding ones fate.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

1 posted 2006-07-08 07:39 AM

You came along and saw me,
And held me in your arms
You kissed me with your sweet soft lips
I felt safe in your arms

This was wonderful and well enjoyed, I can see your poetry will be looked for.

Sincerely
Rick

Cari07
Junior Member

since 2006-06-28

Posts 33
Missouri, US of A

2 posted 2006-07-09 12:56 PM

Its sweet, straight to the point, and very easy to relate to. I liked it.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

3 posted 2008-12-17 08:46 AM

Short but sweet. I liked it.

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