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James_A_Fraser
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0 posted 2006-08-07 08:00 PM



All For One

It isn’t much to ask
while lying here, my breath
forgotten in the center of the dark;
a day, perhaps, an hour –
a moment, seconds just to see you
in some special time, or failing that,
some ordinary scene of any day.
I have so many now you know,
the years and years of heartbeats
laid in front of me, long stacks of them,
a range of lonely beating, and I would
trade all, all, for any one of yours,
to bring you for that instant
in an ordinary night or morning,
all my heart for any beat of you;
this is the bargain that I offer nightly,
lying in the center of the dark:
One for all, all for one.

© Copyright 2006 James A. Fraser - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-08-08 09:11 AM


all my heart for any beat of you;
this is the bargain that I offer nightly,
lying in the center of the dark:
One for all, all for one.

A scripture comes immediately to mind... "Greater love hath no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends."

You have written this great a love so beautifully... what an incredible heart you have!!

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2 posted 2006-08-08 09:26 AM


Only a selfless, generous spirit could have written such giving and loving words.

You have a beautiful heart, James.

Loving Light,
Linda

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3 posted 2006-08-08 09:59 AM


Jamie

A heart so tuned can only win in the end.  

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4 posted 2006-08-08 11:36 AM


SweetJaime~
You are right ...~
And ... it's never too much to ask~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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5 posted 2008-09-15 03:29 AM


This is my favorite poem. My favorite poem ever.
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