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Time's Yet
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Time's Yet |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Time's Yet when will tapers and the light begins to extinguish come the night when no one seams the opened care the hope, one wonders is just where? when pieces stay puzzled and the time measures past against present climb when storms erode one's dreams in life the days are pared, each cut of knife when tomorrow is not sure of might with disappointments seeming trite when compared to what lies within it's then my mind begins to win and spin it this way and then that until the thoughts begin to matt and picture perfect what will be when real survives the fantasy... alone and grounded, sailing through the best of yet is within my view... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"and spin it this way and then that until the thoughts begin to matt and picture perfect what will be when real survives the fantasy... alone and grounded, sailing through the best of yet is within my view..." YES!! May it be smooth sailing sweet lady! Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
alone and grounded, sailing through the best of yet is within my view... ~*~ Did I ever tell you that I named myself a hoptimist? yep.... So this poem fills my bill, and thank you very much! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Maureen! As always. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very uplifting! |
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