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Summer Dream In Winter
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Summer Dream In Winter |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan 
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In my dreams I see the moonlight shining... Shining over the night, fields of green. There's a burning feeling in my heart for a place I long to be. In my dreams I hear birds singing amongest the forest of trees,the river runs along in between O' so very peacefully. In my dreams I long for summer. Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You tempt me to transform your poem into "Winter Dream in Summer", because I am melting ... ahh, the moon shining over fields of white ... Your beautiful yearning words emanate such peace, the river brings freshness, I think the Summer you dream of might be a welcome reality. Love, Margherita  |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you Margherita for the wonderful comment. This was an older poem of mine. Done some tweaking and changing to it. It is summer here,enjoying it to the fullest with planting flowers,things. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
grinning here, letting you know I shall keep this safely tucked away to re-read again in January or February  |
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Cari07 Junior Member
since 2006-06-28
Posts 33Missouri, US of A |
Not only is this beautiful, but it hits home with me. I love to go around barefoot and fish away a summer night, or watch fireflies. I just love summer. The cold of winter hurts, it makes me sick, its not fun. All winter long I dream of summer too. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
froggy, I couldn't help but read this aloud. It flows ever so gently and naturally. Very, very pretty and a refreshment from yesterday's tasks! This is a nice place to stop and begin a new day. Thanks! miscellanea |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
No doubt this was written in winter. It sure paints a captivating picture. Good write froggy. By the way, great quotation from Albert Schweitzer. PLEASE VISIT MY REGULARLY UPDATED WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you all for the wonderful comments. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"In my dreams I hear birds singing amongest the forest of trees,the river runs along in between O' so very peacefully. In my dreams I long for summer." Very nice write.  But I can't wait for football weather! I mean Fall... JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Froggy~ This is a delightful read~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you JL for the comment. I myself like the NBA ( Go Heat) :-) Thank-you Marge for the comment. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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