Open Poetry #38 |
Palette Perfect |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Palette Perfect Mushroomed beige loom my beginnings, exposed in simple nudity, you see me situated before you, living awaits me in color jeweled pigments soon adorn me in spots and dots of crimson and cadmium lemon streams of manganese violet silked with ultramarine blue shall swath my shoulders, while cobalt teal and antwerp blue titivate my curves windsor emerald shall elevate status, as other tints and blushes, shades and traces come to call, in their blendings and swirls without regard of line or context, paying no heed soon, soon, my once pale countenance is but a congealed artifice and naivety vanished in black perhaps it is best if I were to stay in a state of nudity by remaining mushroom beige, allowing you alone to blush me your favorite shade of red |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ This one *smiles* me in vivid brush-stroked thoughts~ Clever .. clever~ *Huglets ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie Your pallet, a sensual delight of mushroom or color, is beautiful!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"perhaps it is best if I were to stay in a state of nudity by remaining mushroom beige, allowing you alone to blush me your favorite shade of red" OOOH!!!! A new favourite from you!!!!! I felt as though I were twirling and twirling in soft shades of swirled silk. Then the WOW sensual ending....yummy! Off to show this one to Wiz. Hugs YOU!! For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Va-Va-Voom! Heeheee... Nice Sunshine!! JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I did love that last verse! wonderful write that left me smiling |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed the dazzling colors of you, and the passionate poetic hue 'naked beige' a passionate self-portrait |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
As our enchantress said. I also saw you swirling with multi colored silk scarves. Beautiful in all your womanhood and that multifacted, captivating smile. Cheers, martyjo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
reminds me of a vase being filled with the ends of flowers slowly on purpose lovely |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
in their blendings and swirls without regard of line or context, paying no heed soon, soon, my once pale countenance is but a congealed artifice and naivety vanished in black perhaps it is best if I were to stay in a state of nudity by remaining mushroom beige, allowing you alone to blush me your favorite shade of red this was a mecca of mega colors of the stunning lady who wrote this...everything in moderation...class, intelligence and a lady with a style of her own wonderful write |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Loved this, SIL! |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Sweet Femininity! I love it Sunshine! :-) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As usual, Sunshine creates her rainbow for us all to enjoy! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooooh !! I'm with my sister on this elegant piece! Keepin' a new favourite!! hugs, Chrislane Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Serena Junior Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 47 |
What a beautiful painting |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
*smiling* oh that blush looks good on you......what a picture you paint |
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