Open Poetry #38 |
In Hope of Future Ways |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Befitting a day Of independent travel Cross some realm of It Ours but for a brief moment Be keepers of this, God’s soil ~*~ Brief should be our feast of words humble should be sweet wind heard comprehension could be some release taking what should be a moment’s peace. Who might future leaders be if shepherds were to follow free when tyranny is voiced, subjective; as lesser men fear taking command [reflective] Would that some man, impoverished though be, come to reign by talented means see to rise again, albeit then break the mien oh weak spine of some otherwise [wo]men; Good, nor natural, cannot win same when voices do not quietly reclaim. ~*~ Reason comes by some unreasonable; seasons come by some unseasonable; ease comes by intemperate means; nothing is as it should seem… History should be a climatic real when with a soul, one might feel. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Celebrating our freedom means caring for our land and exercising our right to vote. We must always hold hope and need to pray for our leaders whether or not we agree with their decisions. Thanks for sharing this. Rae |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"humble should be sweet wind heard" We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do love your style and wisdom! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very well done, Karilea. I do so enjoy reading your poetry. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
I agree.Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Reason comes by some unreasonable; seasons come by some unseasonable; ease comes by intemperate means; nothing is as it should seem…" Powerful work Karilea! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Excellent write and excellent timing. love it. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
You indict with great skill. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You write with great phrase and always amaze. Your mind has its ways To lift up my days. A most thought provoking write. Well done. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
E X Q U I S I T E !! Don't bring me down now, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
With a soul such as yours one could certainly feel as one should. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
K- I have read this several times...so much in this piece, and (as so many of your writings) is a piece I will think on for some time. Excellent writing. Patricia |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Perfect for this day. Happy Independence Day, SIL! *hugs*...jo |
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