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Lilting Tilts (duet with the mother sun...)
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Lilting Tilts (duet with the mother sun...) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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The wind blows in lilt of melody I tilt my head, listening to sounds winds circle gently, these chimes on wind carry me, soft breeze, home once again for in a long ago moment I wound a watch to check the tick of now and again I listened hard to the round in my palm of tell me tell me of now and then... I am listening...remembering notes played once upon a yesterday when the sun felt warm upon my face while basking in heavenly amber glow... for when bluegreen eyes were nearer mine as honeysuckle scent grew so strong then mesmerized we toward silksome stream as we basked in midnight sun so long... In flash of mem'ry I then, was there a captured moment time standing still these visions seen, bygone days of youth where wild and free my soul still abides. ~*~  Kari....thank you.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 darn ya'll are good! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm nice blend like sweetwater and thirsty enjoyed it |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the entire poem was magnficant, but this, this was my favorite.... for when bluegreen eyes were nearer mine as honeysuckle scent grew so strong then mesmerized we toward silksome stream as we basked in midnight sun so long... absolutely beautiful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I've said it before and I'll say it again.. Your voices blend in perfect harmony. Well done dear ladies...well done. Hugs to you both, Nancy Don't bring me down now, |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Donna and Karilea for taking our senses down the paths of yesteryear. - Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Donna and Karilea, first of all thank you for the lesson: both the words used in the title are new acquisitons of my vocabulary in English. And that said, I have to add that I love your creative collaboration very much, a perfect harmony resonates through your beautiful words. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna & Karilea...A beautiful blend of two great poets words becoming one within this poem. Thanks for giving us this gift...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
gorgeous! am keeping this beauty  what a nice harmony! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Duets are like that... one poet has a need to write, the other cannot write for need... and then the songs begin. I thank Donna for taking the reins on this one, for allowing me to intersperse my lines... I was but a follower in this... and without Donna, it would not have happend. Thank you all for reading. I think it would be nice to see another duet marathon with several of our talented writers. I hope a few of you will knock on another poet's window soon... and delve right in.  thank you, daughter. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all, so very much for reading our blend of words. Kari as always, it is pure poetic pleasure writing with you, and again, I thank you for taking me where I needed to go. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna and Sissie....listening can take you so far, so close...as can poetry..thank you both for that! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie gal, thank you for stopping in and saying hi!  |
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