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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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lady of the river's sigh I hang down my fingers there in the shadow speak of your illusion as an oak to your mind's windows and you dampen my root earth with trickle singe to my exposure I wear the tarns of your sinspend in the lost of loving surround and pray for unchastened currents that bring the sooth of undulation and the oscillation of iniquity as a sermon to a tempest's caldron to charm me with the writhe of your storm ___________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
babe, I just don't have the words to do this justice... deep....so deep your rivers run m'friend. loved this.  seek the flame within yourself |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wear the tarns well then...  Beautiful you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
as an oak to your mind's windows and you dampen my root earth with trickle singe to my exposure sheesh, this is word manipulation in it's own dress atire...a class act...tintillizing, brilliantly cascaded so that each one fits the other...your could produce a 20 page document with just one kiss...opps, did I say that   Morning D  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Do you think you could let it storm more Stranger? It sounds so good. Fine work. |
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