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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Reality Shadows hidden away return doubts, fears I thought I overcome They begin as whispers and plant their seeds of loathing and darkness I let myself think I was enough That I could be all you needed I let myself believe that I had found an ever lasting love Now as reality becomes clear and this pain settles in my heart I realize I was chasing dreams that could never belong to me "There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness." -Friedrich Nietzsche |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think we have all done this before good write |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
such a good day, you have posted....Reality is so hard sometimes.....keep chasing those dreams!...  and  say hiya to dave...  And so it those we live with |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write! (Welcome to) “Reality” Enjoyed. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
thought of a very easy to read book for you, but cannot remember the name of it... it's about love, change, which is life constantly changing...evolving...and about sea shells, she uses the ocean as an example...ohhhh darn... anyway, this was great and one thing there is no dream on the face of this earth that you couldn't have, but...perhaps that particular dream wasn't good enough for YOU? Think about it...  Have a happy 4th |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you all for your comments It's been awhile since I've posted anything so I wasn't sure I wanted to. It seems my muse goes away when I am happy *chuckles* Some days I have MASSIVE bouts of insecurity... and that is when I manage to get something out. That is where this came from. For you who know me, Dave and I are fine and very much in love. Some days I just get.. well let's just say overly emotional *chuckles* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Reality might change if you change your way of looking at things. This very beautiful and touching write shows indeed a great deal of insecurity, but I am sure that by expressing this through poetry, you will improve your self-confidence... and see yourself as you REALLY are: whole and beautiful. One of the intrinsic characteristics of our dreams is that they are not limited ... they are vast! Welcome back! Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh am I glad you made that comment about you and Dave it's been a long time since I read you happy or sad, stay in touch, ok? let the muse come out and play for a while |
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