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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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in the mouths of clouds fragile as metal mallets striking the stones of echos there was only a sinner's wind to warm the lady's river when her moan songs strummed she had mirrors for names secret pillows for her dreams she met a teacher and taught her lips spilled liquor but her words were heathen like fingered vines of spawn that laced in golden curls to elucubrate her whisper's wet with a ravishing vulgarity so her seams were swollen open _________________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
in the mouths of clouds fragile as metal mallets striking the stones of echos there was only a sinner's wind to warm the lady's river when her moan songs strummed she had mirrors for names secret pillows for her dreams ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ gawd Dark, I do love reading you. Nobody does it quite like you do, much enjoyed the words this fine morning. Hugs big guy... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you encourage images that I've never before seen...except in my own mind...nice to think and feel exceptional writing!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs thanks to you hon ______________ ms leej, we are mindmates again? thanks lady friend |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Methinks I see a two way looking glass... and a very lovely vista....  Thanks, DS |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank YOU for your eyes |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"she had mirrors for names secret pillows for her dreams she met a teacher and taught" this part...yep.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sea, yes that part thank you for your thoughts |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dark...Really enjoyed. You have a gift and I just want to say thanks for sharing it with us...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks paul, your comments are a blessing |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
"striking the stones of echoes" Yes. Silent as they may be...never mute. Extraordinaire! Klassy [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (06-29-2006 11:05 AM).] |
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FiercestCalm Junior Member
since 2006-06-24
Posts 31michigan |
this is so so so good, but also vaguely disturbing. i mean-whoa! what imagery! the last line gave me chills in the way i suppose only thoughts from a dark stranger can. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl, thanks my dear for the touch _______________ Friend fierce, thanks to you...it is disturbing..but intended to disturb in a pleasureable way. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"there was only a sinner's wind to warm the lady's river when her moan songs strummed" I can almost hear her moan songs Stranger. Well done. |
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