Open Poetry #38 |
Pondering the Inevitable |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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~ I pray death be quick and quiet not given a chance to deny it and no time to incite a riot may the grip be tight so I cannot pry it I pray death be quick and quiet. ~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Dixie, And I pray it's not in a hurry. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Amen....and a two-hands-up vote for that "not soon" idea! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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thanks guys...I hope it doesn't come too soon either...but when it does I want it to be instant, not slow and drawn out yaknow? |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I would definately have to agree with that! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Me too... JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Good thoughts in here...but like everyone else said, not in a hurry! sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
May you get your wish... ...but, not just yet. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is what I hope for, too. No, long drawn out, with a lot of suffering, first. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To fall asleep... would be a blessing. Not too soon, mind you... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...Hopefully not any time soon...Paul To dream a dream in Heaven be I close my eyes and sleep peacefully Let death come as I sleep I pray the lord my soul to keep ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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beautiful Paul...just beautiful!!! I so enjoyed the comments here! Thank you each |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
We all seem to share that same wish. hard on the family left behind but best for the one leaving... You Are Loved |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
I think I would like to see it coming . . . but "gently, into that goodnight". |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
You know. Sometimes I feel I want to be frail and tiny, so someone could just hold me in a big 'ole rocking chair and rock me to sleep. Must be something held over from baby hood when I was a three and a half pound premature infant.LOL. You Are Loved. |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
I very much like this poem. I like the contruction, the subject matter and like everyone else, I wish you this wish many years down the road. ... There is no normal life Wyatt, just life ... so live! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Dixie, I do understand this, too easy to think of, but never the answer, none know what does await. It might be that we all hold hands together when that time comes and have no chance to escape it. Good write my friend, but I think that is life that has its grip on you and you have to stay with us all for years yet. Be well my friend with mind to live and love. Sincerely Rick |
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