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Of shells and such...
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Of shells and such... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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 Reach through my tightly-closed blinds ~ Unlock a new day. *~*~* Spent waves, rushing back To the sea...drags pebbles, sand, From under my feet. *~*~* The waves rise and fall Sing like my blood in the conch He holds to his ear. *~*~* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
stimulating all the senses, this delicate inspirational song, took me there, and I felt the tug of the tide on my feet, as millions of white particles were dragged over them, out to sea.... Spent waves, rushing back To the sea...drags pebbles, sand, From under my feet. The waves rise and fall Sing like my blood in the conch He holds to his ear. amazing...enjoyed this so much  |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
i do so enjoy the sea arthur |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great job! Excellent!! JL  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A delightful feast of haiku treats! Beautifully scribed, Enchanting One!  Loves 'n hugs 'n seashells, Linda  |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
such free expression in such a controlled structure. great poems. PLEASE VISIT MY REGULARLY UPDATED WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now you have made me want to go down to the beach! love this little wonder, Nancy! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Enchanted lady in pink...so pretty, both you and the shells! loved this! Karen  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedLady~ I love it ... just for the shell of it~ Now you make me want to go Archiving and find my piece by that name !! Later~ Dinner time approaches here~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh how lovely. |
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GTP Junior Member
since 2006-06-18
Posts 35NC...USA |
very serene, almost dreamlike!... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This is a wonderful trilogy of words and images Tinker. I can hear the waves and feel the soft breezes from the lake. Very beautiful... believe in what your heart feels... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Exquisite imagery. Gosh, I have been away for so long. Proof positive with this poem I need to come home to Passions more often. Patricia |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Where I want to be... at the lake. Great write!!!! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
I picked up the shell and listened to the ocean after reading your poem. It was lovely. Huggs Kimberly |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
NancyLee, these are wonderful! *hugs*...jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Thank you all for your great replies~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the morning christened in your words |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deeply inspiring words, dear Nancy! Leaves me with a desire to sit in silence at the shore and simply watch ... Love and hugs. Margherita |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I love this, Nancy. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy, you do know how to pull us into your web, don't you? Thanx! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Simple sounds round in the ear... Excellent, Nancy.. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Beautiful seaside tableau....  sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Loved this Nancy!! Paul |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You find the neatest words to describe your thoughts. Hugs, Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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