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Open Poetry #38

please save me

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2006-07-07 10:40 PM

take me up to the clouds
lay me down set me free
take me to another place
another day when i wasnt
addicted to you so

oh these pills oh this
warm body of yours i crave
please let me come over and
save me just for today

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

ApeironCalamity
Junior Member

since 2006-07-03

Posts 10
California

1 posted 2006-07-07 11:46 PM

That was amazing! I love the end, it's so...I don't know what. It just works wonderfuly.

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Taylor S.
"ApeironCalamity"

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2006-07-08 12:39 PM

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-07-08 05:25 PM

I know this feeling...thank God it does fade away with time

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