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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2006-06-25 01:31 PM

It needn't had
to storm.

No sycamores
nor nightengales
need lose direction.

The clouds presented,

aimless, in a
dreamlike drizzle,

left to fade
upon my lips,

in shades of
self interpretation.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-25-2006 03:32 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-06-25 02:49 PM

quote:
aimless, in a
sudden drizzle,

left to fade
upon my lips,

You interprete yourself wonderfully, dear Michele!

I'm always captivated by your creations.

Love,
Margherita

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

2 posted 2006-06-25 04:40 PM

Enchanting...just a sigh of loveliness.

You ever hear the song 'Storms' by Fleetwood Mac(written by resident rock goddess Stevie Nicks)?
This kinda reminds me of that, what with the metaphors and self-reflection.

Keep it up.

"Is any song worth singing if it doesn't help?" -- Wilco, 'Wishful Thinking'

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2006-06-25 05:30 PM

yes, Mish!

Poetic Concept
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 66
God's Fingerprint

4 posted 2006-06-25 06:03 PM

Interesting I liked it...I had to read it ten times but i like it alot actually despite its length it was very self-reflecting

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"How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live"
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2006-06-26 12:52 PM

Smiling

I only needed to read it once...I chose to read it again, and again...

No storms needed...
I saw the vision of the beach, on an overcast summer morning...soft rain, low clouds...rich in feeling, texture and surprise.

TD

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2006-06-26 02:19 AM

You paint such beautifully emotional landscapes Michelle, this is lovely.

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2006-06-26 07:09 AM

you make things into other things ms inky
an artist with restless fingers, enjoyed it

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2006-06-26 07:32 AM

aimless, in a
dreamlike drizzle,

left to fade
upon my lips,

in shades of
self interpretation.

wonderfully written and described...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2006-06-26 07:42 AM

Like TD, I thought ...a beautiful write~~

M

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2006-06-28 01:26 PM

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2006-06-28 01:31 PM

E X Q U I S I T E ! !

Don't bring me down now,
let me stay here for awhile
You know life's too short,
let me bathe here in your smile.

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