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Persistent Love
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Persistent Love |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Walking along the sea I miss you, wishing you near Holding me the way you do In my dreams. I want to frolic with you Become more than a friend. If I could reach out and Touch your heart, I wonder if I should melt Like butter in a skillet. You're such a special person In my created reality, To have you love me too A dream for me come true. |
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GTP Junior Member
since 2006-06-18
Posts 35NC...USA |
it is what we all wish and long for in our lives..."your" should be "you're"... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Truly lovely! Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jody5 Young or old we all feel the same. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Yes GPT and I have found it in My God. Thank you for the correction. Margherita, I am so blessed to have written such a lovely poem, I am glad you liked it. Semour Talbina, I seemed to have captured what most people desire from love. Thank you for yor comment.  |
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