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Beautiful Emptiness
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Beautiful Emptiness |
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transparent_beauty New Member
since 2006-06-21
Posts 4MI, USA |
"Beautiful Emptiness" beautiful is emptiness and dreadfully cliché clenching to the pit of your being feeble to portray your complete genuine meaning and it overtakes you like the heat of a mid-summer's day as you are caught blind-sighted when the sun emits it's ray to apprehend your failure to find truth in your dismay while you decipher what is authentic and what is just word play raised up and held in place to make something become of this harsh reality making light of what we don't understand seeing the picture in all actuality or holding our imperfections in the palm of our hands society will guide you to a familliar place where the exact replica of every mirror will haunt you stamp a fictitious smile on your double face it's enticing, it's ideal it's anything but real leaves you with an unsatisfying hunger for what is true but beautiful is emptiness only when emptiness is filled with you. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed your first post and will look out for more from you. Please check your email for a special message!  sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome! I liked this first post a lot...will be looking for more! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was delightful...nice to see someone who understands themselves so well, despite what others think... Welcome to Passions, looking forward to reading more of you... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your login name is perfectly fitting for what emanates from your captivating first poem. Welcome on Pip! Love, Margherita  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Your entrance post is exceptional. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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trUstNooNe Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 91 |
i like it...your poem is very tru..nice write!*! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I enjoyed your poem of discovery. I loved the ending how "Beautiful Emptiness" is actually Beautiful Fullness. The ending was Great. I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future. -Bob |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
i agree with everyone else very good first write Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Nice! |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
splendid write. I'm In agreement with everyone else, Welcome. Huggs Kimberly |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"society will guide you to a familliar place where the exact replica of every mirror will haunt you stamp a fictitious smile on your double face it's enticing, it's ideal it's anything but real leaves you with an unsatisfying hunger for what is true" Sounds like "street-smarts" Non-the-less... It is so true. Beautiful poetry. JL |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Welcome to Passions!!!! This is a good one! Looking forward to more, Kristabell |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Welcome! I so enjoyed reading your first post. Patricia |
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