Open Poetry #38 |
Listen to your heartbeat and dance... |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
…who would know a little brown dove of chocolat would bring some piece of happy to dance dance, heart, dance when children ask of life and spouses ask what? and askance asks dance, heart, dance; born this soul of me, in a coldest part of earth’s time against all odds… still, a heart beats, someone close gave a listen… some signs spell life and oh! life sings… oh, God, lift…lift please, lift them beyond hope for hope brings beat, hearts beat listen listen to your heartbeats and dance ~*~ Dedicated… to Krystal June 21, 2006 |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
lovely poem and picture! *chocolat* I love that word. I was pulled in by the title. And now I feel like dancing... |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Nice, I will do that indeed! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
great structure i like the way the heart is addressed nice write PLEASE VISIT MY REGULARLY UPDATED WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Precious! And I loved the rhythm......jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie "to dance dance, heart, dance when children ask of life" How precious then is the rhythm! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"…who would know a little brown dove of chocolat would bring some piece of happy" Smiling big time and you know why!!! Yup..those little brown doves sure bring on the happy times. This is wonderful Karilea!! Great pic...thank you for sharing. Hugs~Nancy |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
This sings to me this morning! Have been chasing cows until I'm blue in the face and glad for this refreshment! Thanks, Sunshine. I think I'll just 'earmark' this one! misce |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Now earmarked! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, Karilea, I am! Thanks to your magical poem! Miscellanea I'd LOVE to help you herd cows! - Owl |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious! thanks for sharing this |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A beautiful picture and poem, Karilea. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
born this soul of me, in a coldest part of earth’s time against all odds… still, a heart beats, and this is why I curl up with all the wonderful books at PIP and read this is a glorious dedication, inspiration full of love, love the pictures and the words... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
From your heart to the world! Beautiful!! JL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The beat of your loving heart words always makes me want to dance! Precious pic of your pretty darlin's! Lovely post to happen upon! Blessings of love to all! Linda |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is truly inspiring words for me. I am so glad I went looking for you! Love, P |
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