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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN 
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Father of the fatherless, befriending the depraved; exalter of the humble, humbling the saved. You abandon the respectable while respecting the despised; abet the lonely and the poor, abhor the rich and wise. The simple simply believe you and know your loving touch. The swearing swear you don't exist while missing you so much |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Well done ! Well said ! WONDERFUL !!!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Nicely done! |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
See.. I told you that you are talented. Here's the proof. This is AWESOME! Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
I have no idea why people let this get so far down, I loved it. Ayn Rand came to mind. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I loved this! The first stanza really stood out to me though, i must say that's my favorite part of the whole poem... Good job  @-->--- |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: Back to the forefront :: bows :: |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yep nicely penned |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Thanks, Thanks so very much! |
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