Open Poetry #37 |
Still Waters |
Liz Sinclair Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93Atlantis |
Still Waters I felt the tide shiver; it cried for remembrance. Back and forth, it paraded with silent beauty. Washed away amidst foamy lips, it became the memory of a love lost in this world of drowning sorrows. And as it kissed the shore for the very last time, it crept quietly away into the pale oblivion. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nicely penned! your word tide really pulled words back and forth |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I especially loved the first stanza - beautiful! - Owl |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I'd have called this 'Tidal Flows'. Still waters run deep, or flow 'Not' and this moves which I liked, but was more a 'Tidal Flow or Wash' Dave |
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