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bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
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0 posted 2006-03-05 10:00 PM



Thrown together words
by chance, have given rhyme.
A thrown together universe
by chance, has given time.

There's thrown together lovers who have thrown away their hearts,
although they're still together they are living far apart.
There's thrown together people that by chance are known as friends;
thrown together millions thrown together end on end.


Thrown together children cry in thrown together homes,
even though they are together they're together all alone.
We're a thrown together people in a thrown together land
thrown together by a fate that's thrown together... UNDERSTAND?

BY CHANCE today we're living
thrown together you and I.


BY CHANCE before tomorrow
thrown together we may die.

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icequeen
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since 2001-12-09
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1 posted 2006-03-05 10:09 PM


WOW! This is great - you have put your hand on the situation and held it up for us to see.  I also like that it has a "beat" to it when one reads it


Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

Juju
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2 posted 2006-03-05 10:11 PM


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bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
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Bloomington, IN
3 posted 2006-03-05 10:49 PM


Just something I've Thrown Together tonight.
:

your replys, Heaven to my ears!

"Bubbles"

XOx Uriah xOX
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4 posted 2006-05-16 12:44 PM


::shakes head in amazement::   Wonderful write !
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