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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-02-07 10:28 AM



Beauty
Grace
So natural
As to be oblivious
To its power

Lucky is he
Who blessed
With such company
Is able to secure
Some hidden bower

While the rest of us
Live with what is less

The confident forms
Of incompetence
That rule the world



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1 posted 2006-02-07 11:36 AM


Lucky are we... to have such a poet in our midst. *S* This is fantastic!
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2 posted 2006-02-11 02:21 AM


It is different for everyone, and few of us are so blessed as to find ours. A poem like this one can be a guidestar, for anyone who truly wants one.

You just get better and better.

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om
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3 posted 2006-02-11 06:46 PM


nice poem on that thought
Dominique-Simone
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4 posted 2006-02-11 07:15 PM


Wonderful Write!!
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-23 02:16 PM


one is picked, one is dropped.

beautiful.

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