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Open Poetry #37
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-02-11 12:50 PM


Startled
Over winter snow—

The heron’s cry
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-02-11 03:03 PM

Excellent John!!
Well done indeed.

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2 posted 2006-02-11 03:07 PM

Beauty in such few words
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3 posted 2006-02-11 05:18 PM

A few choice words and yet you still manage to convey such vivid imagery. Enjoyed.

Andrew
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4 posted 2006-02-11 07:16 PM

Good Job! I really do love your work
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5 posted 2007-04-23 02:14 PM

I cry for the heron's illusion.
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