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Huan Yi
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Waukegan

0 posted 2006-02-04 08:54 AM



They’re probably sour
Anyway said the fox
Of the grapes

And with that it went on
Bright eyed in the delusion
Of still being in charge

Proudly independent
Of anything or anyone

Wholly contained

Indignant
Toward the stars



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poetry_queen
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since 2006-02-02
Posts 94
england,
1 posted 2006-02-04 09:48 AM


really liked this poem. am new to this site so eventually i will try to read all of your work x
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2 posted 2006-02-04 09:57 AM


Wow-that-ending! You do know how to bring a punch up from the floor...dang, I wish I'd thought of this one.....

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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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uk
3 posted 2006-02-04 01:25 PM


Another strange and chinese poetry type
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-02-05 01:00 AM




Yes, but good!



Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-23 02:11 PM


poem of a poem of a poem.
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