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Open Poetry #37

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-02-04 07:50 AM

North field lake
On it—one white swan

Slowly gliding
Across the blue

As if to say
What it can not speak

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2006-02-04 10:20 AM

A lesson here...in how to write the short ones. Well done!

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wanderingin
Junior Member

since 2006-02-03

Posts 39

2 posted 2006-02-04 10:31 AM

oh, wow! I agree! Well done!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2006-02-04 10:35 AM

Very nice

Charisma

poetry_queen
Member

since 2006-02-02

Posts 94
england,

4 posted 2006-02-04 11:50 AM

so short but so full of emotion and passion! a great write
leanne x

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

5 posted 2006-02-04 12:49 PM

Beautiful nice and simple but beautiful

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-02-05 01:06 AM

Well done John.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

7 posted 2007-04-23 02:09 PM

your heart is still wondering.

very beautiful one.

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