Open Poetry #37 |
paleskingirl |
oakgrove Junior Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 12 |
i took a little green daydream out of the jutting hair of innocence and brought it down to my white garden of sand covering it with a blanket of hospitality i let it hear the eighteen birds of reason bending and worn i wanted a vivid thing of context embossed with the color of a friend and rushing against the insincere paused outside the mouth of exposed time i try to grab the worthy twist of fate hiding interposed in the weeds of calm touched by hand of a palm stroked by the breath of a shell i spoke asthma endearments and babbled glistening promises meant for a longer end a slight breeze of change blew a conch across a field of familiars to my excited arm to grab and blow with all my honesty and call the others to supper |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
good read...welcome to Passions |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this. -Juju -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Beautifully expressed entrance post! I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Please check your email for a special Passions greeting~ In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Another excellent poem. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Thought provoking first post. Enjoyed the visual. TD |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend oak g...daymmmmn you sound like no...but I do like the sound of you enjoyed this |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome to Pip! I do look forward to hearing more from you. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interesting write...welcome to Passions |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP! Quite a write! |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
really enjoyed reading this poem, very powerful write leanne x |
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