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ska babe
Member

since 2005-11-08

Posts 58
nowwhere, IN

0 posted 2006-02-01 06:36 PM

I am gone
And don’t you cry
For I don’t matter in that life
No one cries
No one cares
For I am the person that no one sees crying for peace
So don’t you worry
I’ll be fine
And don’t you even think about crying
For I am gone and never coming back
So I am saying goodbye to the world and to you
So goodbye to everything and everyone

"I am the one who has to die when it's my time to die, so I'm gonna live life the way I wanna"- Jimi Hendrix

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

1 posted 2006-02-02 05:15 AM

Seems you like you're depressive poetry life can't really be that bad?

domesticbark
New Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 5

2 posted 2006-02-02 07:56 PM

i really understand what you mean, sometimes you gotta say goodbye. and to the post above, yes, life can be that bad, even worse. things go wrong, not all of us have great lives.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2006-02-02 09:29 PM

Look down
and you’ll see a lot of people yelling “jump!”
It’s up to you
how you will entertain them. . .

oakgrove
Junior Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 12

4 posted 2006-02-02 10:03 PM

im impressed with the jimi hendrix quote hope you feel better in the morning

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

5 posted 2006-02-02 10:08 PM

I don't know. I didn't take this as "depressive poetry". It seems as if the poem is a happy pronouncement that a choice has been made. Nicely done ska. Cheers - Ed

Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it".

kitvb1
Junior Member

since 2006-01-23

Posts 28
Trebgast, Germany

6 posted 2006-03-01 05:29 AM

Hey Ska... r u ok? Where r u babe? If u need to talk....

Kit

We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths.

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FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

7 posted 2006-03-02 12:23 PM

Hi ska babe,

Hope you're fine.

hope to see more of your poetry to express how you feel.... but don't do what you feel.

See you around.

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

8 posted 2006-04-28 07:22 AM

Good write!!

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