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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-01-30 11:24 AM



Whispers Of The Gentle Rain
~*Marge Tindal*~

In the morning quiet
you came to me again
thoughts of you fell softly
like whispers of the gentle rain~

I gathered them about me
snuggling in the tender
of all the precious memories
knowing you are worth my remember~

Just in case you didn't hear me
let me tell you just once more
your love and your friendship
are moments of sweet adore~

Foreverly Yours Ink
~*Marge Tindal*~
Copyright 2006

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2006 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-01-30 11:28 AM


How lovely Marge...
and I do love the font as well!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2006-01-30 11:32 AM



Enchantress~
I 'font' you would !

Thank you, lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

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3 posted 2006-01-30 11:37 AM


A very uplifting poem Marge.  Much enjoyed!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Martie
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4 posted 2006-01-30 12:25 PM


Marge/sis....Your friendship is very dear to me!  
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5 posted 2006-01-30 02:18 PM


oh I love this, it ministers to my soul as soft as a gentle rain
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6 posted 2006-01-30 04:26 PM


*sigh* this is soooooo beautiful, so gentle penned, a gem as usual dear lady

(((hugs))
Charisma

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7 posted 2006-01-30 04:50 PM


In the morning quiet
you came to me again
thoughts of you fell softly
like whispers of the gentle rain~

Your graphics are always so interesting, as are your writings.  Nice job.

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2006-01-30 04:57 PM


Precious...James
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9 posted 2006-01-30 05:21 PM


Gentle loving words.  Love, Joyce
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10 posted 2006-01-30 09:15 PM


breathless, this is priceless marge.  have missed your writings.  got a lot of catching up to do.  moved recently, got my own place, finally. all is great. now i just need to get back into the writing mode.  luv ya

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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11 posted 2006-01-30 09:21 PM


Thank you Marge I needed that.  It was so beautiful and personal.  I love your style

Hugs Kimberly


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12 posted 2006-01-30 10:24 PM


Dear Marge:  A beautiful write, from the title on through!

love
Betty Lou

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So sweet and thoughful.

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14 posted 2006-01-31 12:53 PM


beautiful whispers Margie girl~
a tender, precious write...thanks for sharing always

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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15 posted 2006-01-31 12:57 PM


Precious thoughts, Marge.   ....jo
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16 posted 2006-01-31 09:36 AM


soft ..... as rain's gentle fall upon any heart.

ct

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17 posted 2006-01-31 02:02 PM


I love this Marge
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18 posted 2006-01-31 02:08 PM


Like it Marge

Dave

Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2006-04-18 12:06 PM



Thank you all so very much~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com     

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20 posted 2006-04-20 02:33 PM


I gathered them about me
snuggling in the tender
of all the precious memories
knowing you are worth my remember

How in heck did I miss this? *S*

Maybe I needed it just now... yes... that's it. *S* Beautiful!!!

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21 posted 2006-04-21 07:45 AM


this made me smile
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