Open Poetry #37 |
First Love |
jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
I loved you the first time I saw you I remember your lips touching mine. How you used to stand by that rock As though making yourself hard to find I remember looking back longing Being too shy to speak words I knew you read my heart then It was love at first sight. When you came back after all these years It was hard for us both to fight back the tears. I realized you loved me too, As we spoke of years that had passed You offered to take me with you now But I needed some time to mend from this shock I knew that God had brought you back So I could forgive you for not choosing me When I had picked you to be my first love. I will never forget you or the love in my heart I loved you the first time I saw you And I still love you now... Kimberly B [This message has been edited by jody5 (01-29-2006 08:04 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kim~ 'I knew that God had brought you back So I could forgive you for not choosing me' I saw this title and KNEW ... just KNEW I had to read it ... I believe that 'first loves' are 'always loves' ... the foreverly of time that keeps us suspended in wonderful memories no matter whether we are fortunate enough to ever see that 'first love' again or not~ I LOVE THIS~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful and touching , yes no matter what , first loves are always remembered Hope |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
You bought back sweet memories of my first love. Nicely written, Hugs, Fee Expressions, |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge, Hope,and Fee I want you to know I am all choaked up. When I read this poem I cry because I never got the chance to tell him that I was going to go with him and then due to circumstances I lost track of where he was. I have been looking for him and he's gone. So I trusted the lord and just forgave and If I find him someday, It will be right. If not it will be right too. |
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