Open Poetry #37 |
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weepingwillow Junior Member
since 2006-01-09
Posts 33Sin City-Las Vegas |
Haunted Daily images, vivid Creep in slowly Flash, like photographs Of the past Plagued by diseased sadness Sickening your unfound happiness Engulfed in an angry sea Trapped underneath the current By your inconsolable pain The light of the sun Creating shadows, leading You into its eclipse As I sit here Basking in your crimson emotion Screams, breathless and booming Erupt, volcanically into your ears “Transfuse your secrets Perform your enigmatic dance Tis not I that has caused your Conscious-stricken actions” Silently, As a comics hero transforms The alter-ego that’s within you Steals your eyes Placing them in your front shirt pocket Then merging, I am left Alone with your back to my heart |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
All I can say is WOW!!! |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
I am sorry, this is sad. But there are those who do not wish to be helped, and it is not the fault of those who wish to help. Nice write, Kristabell |
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weepingwillow Junior Member
since 2006-01-09
Posts 33Sin City-Las Vegas |
Thank you both... |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
"Silently, As a comics hero transforms The alter-ego that’s within you Steals your eyes Placing them in your front shirt pocket Then merging, I am left Alone with your back to my heart" beautiful. lovely. xxx farewell the ash-tray girl |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
what and ender nakia your a great writer ~J Then merging, I am left Alone with your back to my heart |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
As a comics hero transforms "The alter-ego that’s within you Steals your eyes Placing them in your front shirt pocket Then merging, I am left Alone with your back to my heart" What a verse! Very creative. |
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