Open Poetry #37 |
Angelic Face (4th of 10 poems before I leave passions) |
poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
This poem is a prequal to "Amy", it was written six years ago and mind you I was only sixteen at the time. So my craftmanship was a little lacking. Though I feel it fitting to place here with you ladies and gents. Every poem about my love was about her, if you scroll back through my works there are a few. This as you can see is why in "Amy" I wrote that she is my muse. Bare with me the next poem will be new, I just wished to come here and read all of the beautiful work that is written here. Her face carved from a perfect slab of marble Kindness is what she shares Beauty is hers, yet she will not admit it Captured by her purity The smile she has is enough of a reason to breathe Insanity is what they say I have Simply for falling for her No matter my heart means more than their words Life is pointless if you do not play by the heart True to life is compassion So is my burning desire for her It is just so bewildering to feel so deeply Wishing to become one with her Everyone else is trivial except for my angel Time stands still, as my eyes are locked upon her All I can say is something meaningless I just want to pour my love-drenched soul out to her To simply place my lips upon hers and ignite a fire deep within. To be able to kiss from head to toe like a thousand rose pedals To lay with in passion with no need for sex Laying in eternity Nestled tightly with a perfect angel Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Life is pointless if you do not play by the heart" I agree wholeheartedly with this statement! Take it from one who knows - the age of 16 returns again when the time is right. Not in "earth years" but inside where it counts. It's called "renewed passion" - Helen |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
wow poe this said things i have tried to say many times , you did it with style and heart , not to mention soul too , the lines i liked the most were these .... Beauty is hers, yet she will not admit it Captured by her purity The smile she has is enough of a reason to breathe Insanity is what they say I have Simply for falling for her No matter my heart means more than their words Life is pointless if you do not play by the heart True to life is compassion ~that right there is poetry may your lifes journeys become your wildest dreams , reach for the stars ... and know your welcome here always poe ~~**^**~~ peace bro ~ JW III " the only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams " - tupac shakur |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you are such a beautiful soul and that line: "Life is pointless if you do not play by the heart" perhaps it should be etched on our bodies at birth |
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Anne Shiever Junior Member
since 2006-01-10
Posts 21KS/USA |
Wow, I just get here and you are soon leaving. May peace and love always find you and fill your heart with joy and gladness. You write wonderfully! Anne Shiever |
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