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Open Poetry #37

someting i wrote long ago

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

0 posted 2006-01-21 10:56 PM

Softly

Softly, I come to you,
your, out-stretched arms enfold me.
your, loving hands caress me.
your, sweet lips seem to draw me into you..
Gently, you love me,
your, strength
your, passion
seeps within me...
Quietly, we lay together.
our arms entwined.
our bodies close.
our hearts are one with each other..

BugBuggy
10-29-1985

jackiej
Junior Member

since 2006-01-21

Posts 12
USA

1 posted 2006-01-21 11:11 PM

This is a beautiful poem, it moved my spirit as I stepped into every word that was written. I could feel your passion. Nice work

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

2 posted 2006-01-21 11:13 PM

thank you so very much jackiej it was wrote for a long lost lover

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

3 posted 2006-01-21 11:26 PM

spirits are one in this lovely sensual poem I loved it. I can tell you wrote it about someone you really loved.

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

4 posted 2006-01-21 11:31 PM

thank you so much for your wonderful reply..love never leaves us whether its by destiny or death....

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2006-01-22 12:06 PM

Beautiful said.
Enjoyed the read.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2006-01-22 01:21 AM

Not sure if I welcomed you to Passions yet, so just in case, Welcome to Passions! This is one passionate poem for our passionate place!

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2006-01-22 03:43 AM

There is nothing like the feeling of laying in the arms of the one you love.

Your words touched my Heart, thanks for sharing.

hugs, Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

8 posted 2006-01-24 07:28 PM

thank you froggy, fee and iliana you are much to kind and especially thank you for all welcoming me to your beautiful poetry site...

bugBUGGY

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