Open Poetry #37 |
Blue and Silver |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Who solves things, Is there none to help make undone, Who can take the heroic tune and make song That can reach everyone Where lyrics wet the will and right the wrong, Drench us and make us belong. Let blues flow In the banks of thanks giving, A river that washes away all pain Revitalizing living, Let it wash all if different or the same, But cleanse not in pity’s name. Who has time To help pull them from the flow, Rescue back the soaking and singing horde, With new life, new hope they know Giving the solving and dissolving word; Who resolves. Maybe it will solve me at long last. Gloom to ratleader whose poem inspired this hopefully he does not object to such modifications to his work |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, This is but a rash on the skin And the answer lies deep within. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
So true my friend let us all be washed to the soul. Gloom |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Professor "Let blues flow In the banks of thanks giving, A river that washes away all pain Revitalizing living, Let it wash all if different or the same, But cleanse not in pity’s name." Very much enjoyed your take on Ed's poem's take on you! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
seems like Woody Guthrie bit ya in the you know ---> muse . . . Is most beautiful . . . |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Martie I hope ratleader also thinks it is acceptable Thank you, littlewing, I think more of Arlo, but Woody is so similar to his son, I appreciate the comparison to a folk star of such brilliance. Gloom |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Object??? Good golly no, that would be like Reggie Bush objecting to his Heisman! See what I mean, folks? This guy has magic.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Dear Sir I am pleased you are pleased and thank you for such kind words Gloom |
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