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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Another of my starter's for ten Meeting, adoration, soulmates, all "etc £up" with a hope a degree of discretion, humour, and of course the plaintive heart that says "wake me later, and tell me I am supposed to enjoy, being woken up". Usual Mickey Take dave Sparkling my body To electric affairs Swirling planets to tease me To heaven And God knows where With Ideas basic To match You lighting your way to my stars To grand displays of solar haze Warming the galaxy to the desires Of your smile Burning as we touch Existing as one That loves When I saw the sun kiss you on a summer's morn And moonlight kissed your hair on the day you were born When I saw the look in your eyes A kind of crimsom mess The swirl of the world beneath your feet Flowing your dress to match your hair And the love of your eyes Was sad and deep and warm I saw the tilt of your nose Light the smile of your lips The love of yourself A sense of belonging in your time and space A deep laughter in your throat Echoing the world's embrace I see you in the world I cannot see the world without You in it's heart And a smile like a roustabout But sometimes I see an upturned nose And a furrowed brow And I wait for the sky to clear And move the thunder loud To sink to an early red dawn Of another summer's morn With tongue in cheek He gaily stepped He saw the essence Then he slipped And as open his knees he fell He lowered his head into the smell |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very interesting write...Not sure I grasp it entirely but it certainly stimulated my imagination from lover, to child to friend to raw reality. Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"A sense of belonging in your time and space A deep laughter in your throat Echoing the world's embrace" outstanding, the way you sketched her |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
I think this was a really romantic and enticing work that grabbed my attention from the first word to the last Kudos! ~Jill |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
ethome Very interesting write...Not sure I grasp it entirely but it certainly stimulated my imagination from lover, to child to friend to raw reality. Eric Thanks Eric. It doesn't flow from the different ideas of a relationship that well. I did try to take it from electric, to blinded eyes, to third act, when the dagger and lawyers arive. One of the problems of writing ideas when I can and then trying to remember them Is 6,246 files, 1,322 folders, 469Mb of data on my personal directory. I went through I point where I just wrote non-stop - hour after hour, day after day, and then had to go back to sites when I remember I had lost and deleted stuff. I have now backed this up to CDs as well as external discs. Thanks for words Midnitesun -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "A sense of belonging in your time and space A deep laughter in your throat Echoing the world's embrace" outstanding, the way you sketched her This was the original sketch, I re-wrote it at times depending on emotion Thanks The Shadow in Blue I think this was a really romantic and enticing work that grabbed my attention from the first word to the last Kudos! ~Jill Not really written for Kudos, I can be big headed enough without that. Pleased you liked Thanks to all Dave |
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