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It's just Us...
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It's just Us... |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
The good times we've had have been so precious The hard time, they have built a love so true Though the dark clouds sometimes Hide their silver lining In the darkest hour The sun comes shining through. Though we search for love In old familiar places But we come around to face reality When are hopes and dreams Are built upon tomorrow It's just us babe, It's just you and me. It's just you and me when are friends Are gone and we are all alone When the chips are down And we come around to face reality It's just us babe, It's just you and me. With tenderness we built a strong foundation Through good and bad we stored up memories And for awhile we walked life's road together And with each step I've loved you can't you see. So it's with this thought I take up pen and paper And with all my heart, I write this melody "Yes" Our hopes and dreams are built upon tomorrow It's just us babe, It's just you and me.... Debo [This message has been edited by Debo (05-20-2006 10:49 AM).] |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I really like this. I would suggest a spell checker and paste from there, but often I dont on principle. You words are very deep, quite powerful, worth saying and I personally feel, of help to others Dave |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Hey thanks Bodger and I want your criticism it helps me understand what you are interpreting. Debo |
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