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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2006-01-21 07:39 AM

There he stood, a shadow,
black, without features,
long forgotten, tossed aside,

Into the dark hole, I fell,
searching for some light,
at the top, he remained,

While I hit bottom, sinking,
looking and searching,
wasted time spent,

he held on with strength,
while I danced in the dark,
he stood, silently still,

In circles, round, round,
like a mouse on a wheel,
something shook my cage,

the world stopped,
I could see, listen,
there was a light,

What did I find?
dressed in rainbows colors,
he was there for me,

back at start, I stood,
should've stayed there,
for when I looked,

over my shoulder,
the answer had been,
there for me,

staring, watching me,
just loving me,
after all this time.

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

1 posted 2006-01-21 04:08 PM

I love this

Dave Page

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

2 posted 2006-01-21 06:09 PM

This was really nice. I liked it.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2006-01-21 06:15 PM

ARH, I love this poem. It sounds like a dream.
I hope it's true, Sweetie?? It's a beautiful
love story, if it is.
Huggies,
Ethel

White Wolf
Member

since 1999-09-18

Posts 371
Somewhere in the vast wasteland

4 posted 2006-01-23 04:34 PM

I love this one. Very touching. Thank you for sharing.

If you are looking for meaning in life, stop. It will find you.

If you are not looking, start. It is out there waiting for you.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2006-01-25 05:56 AM

This was an arrival..an awakening from a long sleep to find that things really could be ok...a poem of renewal in the face of adversity..one that i enjoyed reading very much..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

6 posted 2006-01-25 01:09 PM

romantic , loved the way you wrote this , the way you look back on the past and shine a light from there to the future , great work babe : ) ~ James

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2006-01-25 01:17 PM

"staring, watching me,
just loving me,
after all this time."

~ If only you had known...

EA

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-01-25 03:40 PM

Very romantic. Lovely work.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

9 posted 2006-01-27 01:41 AM

A big hug goes out to all of you, thanking you so much for your wonderful replies, i appreciate them!

they mean alot to me~

~ARH

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

10 posted 2006-01-28 03:59 PM

wow this was an amazing poem, good write

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

11 posted 2006-02-06 05:03 PM

The things we search for we often overlook waiting for the beauty of the world to unfold but it unfolds everyday and we seem to miss it because we are so afraid to open ourselves outwards and touch what is already there

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