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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-02-04 08:13 AM

Sweet and Sour Haiku

Nature’s seasons are
The sweet and sour of life
Is it too spicy?

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

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right...there

1 posted 2006-02-04 10:00 AM

If spicy means "warm and sunny". I'll take spicy Sy. Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

Charisma

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2 posted 2006-02-04 10:36 AM

LIke it!

((hugs))
Charisma

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3 posted 2006-02-04 10:47 AM

Nope, it's delicious....though I do admit I'm partial to the seasonal flavors in Southern California, where we have just three: Spring, Summer, and Next Summer.

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2006-02-04 11:40 AM

scorpio
Everybody has there druthers.

Charisma
Thank you sweety.

Ratleader
Enjoyed your reply.

RedStoneEB
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5 posted 2006-02-04 12:17 PM

I'm getting used to reading your poems very good write

Mysteria

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6 posted 2006-02-04 12:24 PM

You are GOOD at these I tell you.

Myself, I love a it a little

but I know some like it

.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-02-04 02:14 PM

RedStoneEB
Thank you for the time and read.

Sharon,
Some like it hot and some like it cold
Some like it with a plot and a little gold

poetry_queen
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since 2006-02-02

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england,

8 posted 2006-02-04 05:09 PM

really liked this poem. im a huge fan of haiku so i was really interested in this piece. you wrote it so beautifully. keep up the good work
leanne x

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2006-02-04 06:06 PM

poetry_queen
Thank you I'll put on a few more.

The Lady
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10 posted 2006-02-05 12:39 PM

Nice work.

MGROVES

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11 posted 2006-02-05 06:25 PM

gotta have some spice
a variety in life

your a real joy in mine sir

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

[This message has been edited by MGROVES (02-05-2006 11:52 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2006-02-05 07:41 PM

Lady
I guess you like spice.

MGROVES
A little spice never hurt anyone.

DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

13 posted 2006-02-06 07:55 AM

I was told a Haiku was meant to be responded to in kind, so here’s my attempt:

Spring spice delights me
After the winters blandness,
Your words season well.

LeeJ
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14 posted 2006-02-06 08:32 AM

nahhh, the spicer, the better....

Morning Sunshine

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2006-02-06 09:40 AM

Dennis,
Excellent

LeeJ
Each season has its spice.

suthern

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Louisiana

16 posted 2006-02-06 04:44 PM

Now if we were talking food... you know I think there's no such thing as too spicy. *G* But Mother Nature and her hurricanes have me yearning for bland. *G*

Enjoyed this! *S*

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2006-02-06 05:15 PM

suthern
Enjoyed your answer, thank you.

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