Open Poetry #37 |
The Inner Darkness of Thoughts |
Astrogirl18 Junior Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 16Canada |
I can't tell if life's fake or for real Then there is our love, I don't know how you feel There are so many paths, that we all could choose or take, But the ones I seem to follow, I tremble, fall and break. These tears silently slide down, the sides of my face, When no one really knows, I feel like a regretful disgrace. Just hide me far away from love, life and hate All alone scared, confused and fearing of my fate. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hello Bethany and welcome to Passions! Very well written words here that seem to just ache. I hope you enjoy your new home here at Passions. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Pauline Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28Island in the Sun... |
girl, i can totally relate to this poem.. if it reflects how you feel right now, i jus wanna say that there's always hope.. you jus gotta keep believing.. |
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Astrogirl18 Junior Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 16Canada |
Thankyou for the replies your comments really mean alot to me |
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