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Astrogirl18
Junior Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 16
Canada

0 posted 2006-05-17 02:33 PM


I can't tell if life's fake or for real
Then there is our love,
I don't know how you feel
There are so many paths,
that we all could choose or take,
But the ones I seem to follow,
I tremble, fall and break.
These tears silently slide down,
the sides of my face,
When no one really knows,
I feel like a regretful disgrace.
Just hide me far away
from love, life and hate
All alone scared, confused
and fearing of my fate.


© Copyright 2006 Bethany Trainor - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-05-17 03:25 PM


Hello Bethany and welcome to Passions!
Very well written words here that seem to just ache.
I hope you enjoy your new home here at Passions.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Pauline
Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28
Island in the Sun...
2 posted 2006-05-17 07:33 PM


girl, i can totally relate to this poem..

if it reflects how you feel right now, i jus wanna say that there's always hope..

you jus gotta keep believing..

Astrogirl18
Junior Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 16
Canada
3 posted 2006-05-17 08:02 PM


Thankyou for the replies
your comments really mean alot to me

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