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Hum (haiku) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * * * Hum the tune of Love rise above manmade chaos renew Eden now! * * * |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita, It's the seed of love Lies in the white of light, seen In colors glory Love your haiku |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And I love yours, dear Seymour! Thank you, just beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Margherita..."Hum the tune of Love"...every day, yes. A lovely poem!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH MY YES!!!! B E A U T I F U L !! ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Absolutely delightful! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Margherita, I love this haiku for a few reasons....I'm a hopeless romantic and your haiku is beautiful, plus I LOVE sunflowers and the presentation is lovely. I look forward to reading more by you Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Eden is a good idea a paradise where everything grew from |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent! and the flower goes very well with the words... I think your language is justa fina....hokie dokie??!! |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: It is a constant hum. Prior to "Man" Prior to "Eden" Prior to "God" Beautiful write ! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Humming here, Margherita! You paint such a beautiful tune. ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how gorgeous!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling here a sunny good write I adore the haiku form |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Loved this, Margherita, but to "hum the tune of love" means lots of learning before being able to do so and not many have the time or inclination, sadly so. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
my goodness it's been so long since I've seen you and read you... this and you are amazing Hello and Good Morning  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all so much for your loving comments and dear LeeJ for welcoming me back. Yes it was quite a while that I wasn't around, I always hope to have more time soon ... Love, Margherita |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
You decide each day how you feel and what you say cheerfull, is my way |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Cheerful is the best way, dear Inclan. Thank you for stopping by and for your beautiful reply. Love, Margherita |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 this made me smile |
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