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bens101
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since 2006-05-05
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0 posted 2006-05-17 11:50 AM




  
   She lies wearing silk
   on the rock
   down by the river
   waiting for me to paint
   and make her a saint.


   I take a breath
   give it my best
   guide the brush
   with my mind
   try to make something beautiful.


   My eyes are closed
   I see her body draped in colours
   and it's incredible
   when I think
   how perfect this will be.


   She motions to me with her finger
   I show her my picture
   and she nodes in approval
   as we slip underwater
   to treasure our wicked surprise.

   Benjamin Prins  2006.

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-05-17 11:55 AM


bens101
Enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-05-17 01:48 PM


beautiful write
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