Open Poetry #37 |
The Minstrel's Ballad |
Liz Sinclair Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93Atlantis |
The Minstrel's Ballad Mine eyes have sought such beauty as her and tenderly strummed my passion's harp. So bittersweet, this song doth sing, to find its way to my maiden's heart. Precocious moon, oh light my way onward; my love, she waits for me by the flowing stream. Her eyes like midnight, I long to gaze upon and her skin to caress is of velvety cream. Her hair of auburn, like flames dancing alive! My fingers yearn such softness in bliss. For her beauty has enchanted my weary soul, and upon her lips, I shall bestow a kiss. Passion's grace has entombed my being. Alas! my maiden belongs to another. But on this eve of twilight's dream, I vow my love, now and forever. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Liz I have to assume they get points for the grading Your words are beautiful, and if they have a ranking system, and it doesn't earn them money, stop destroying talent, such as this but allowing it to go unlooked at Dave |
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