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bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

0 posted 2006-05-16 02:50 AM



The wind doesn't cry, "Mary".

It's not,
the wind sweeping dead leaves through these autumn sponged  streets.


no, NO, not the wind!
The wind doesn't whirl leaves NOR names, as a covey of broken sparrows...doesn't dash them into the half - lit shop windows.


NO, please belive me.

PLEASE BELIVE !!!
THE WIND DOESN'T CRY MARY!!!

Never has...

The wind doesn't scream your name!

NO IT WAS NOT THE WIND!

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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-05-16 02:38 PM


Everything I like, but I dont think they like your sense of humour

Your words are Punch'ey, attacking, aggressive, and I can vaguely remember the 'Wind Cries Mary'

About all I can do

Tx - Rx and brilliant words

Dave

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