Open Poetry #37 |
Against The Wind |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Against The Wind The wind tonight makes me angry, absence of calm and you, restless mind and empty heart, words that never made it through. I've accepted those years are gone, the best years of me and youth, you miss me; funny, I do too, if you want to know the truth. You hate that it's ending this way, well, how do you want it to end? There is no easy way to walk and I'm not good at pretend. I love you and I hate you regardless of the chaos it brings, and there's nothing you can do about either of those things. It's the only way for this to end; keep pushing on against the wind. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
"No man can serve two masters: for either he will hate the one, and love the other; or else he will hold to the one, and despise the other. Ye cannot serve God and mammon." Matthew 6: 24 Somehow that was my thought that came to mind, not to preach, just to be kind. Wonderful words Dixie, of a wonderful soul a poet who cares |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
still running...against the wind.... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dixie - I guess in all things it's a push against the wind - what a life! But a good and enjoyable write - thanks. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Often a struggle pushing against the wind , but we will find the inner strength and get there in the end Dixie friend Hope |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You hate that it's ending this way, well, how do you want it to end? There is no easy way to walk and I'm not good at pretend. neither am I... enjoyed this and you...the truth of life... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you each for reading and leaving your thoughts... I always appreciate your replies |
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picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 112 |
remember every ending is a new beginning and memories last a lifetime! Sadly sweet! thanks for sharing, picturegramic |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I've accepted those years are gone, the best years of me and youth, you miss me; funny, I do too, if you want to know the truth." The new Dixie is emerging and she will love the new you! Great poem. I especially liked the phrasing of the above lines and the title....so appropo. ...jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a fine write Dixie gal the wind can be your friend too, when it blows chaos away from your doorstep |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
A fine write Dixie, simple truth. Wishing you a tail wind! :-) |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Dixie, I appreciate your posting but can not print what is in my heart. This one hit WAY too close to home, on many levels. I have often thought down these lines. INclan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks everyone...each of your comments are very touching |
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