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Martie
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0 posted 2006-05-13 07:36 PM



    

Beauty

There is beauty
in every face
a twinkle
a glow
arch of lid
breath of flower

and to trace
line and form
is no miracle to
sleight of hand
but the heart light
that grows and cascades
from within

Marian
      

She left her mark within my cheekbones
as sure as summer her shape is mine
I even think within the lining
of my heart she left her sign

The shaded place of back yard peace
like open book is where she stays
sometimes she is in the humming
of mourning dove upon her grave

I see the skirt of many colors
circle round her sun tanned legs
I see her reach across the chasm
place four leaf clovers on the page

So fragile is the lip of time
that death has left upon my heart
in the evening dwells the perfumed
evening breeze her fragrance’s part

Gather round her all the wild flowers
oceans place her in their fold
captured are the star night feathers
that fall upon her heavenly stroll

I see her in my mirror smiling
she shades her eyes within my own
and in the sand of summer’s footprints
she is not walking all alone

________
I was hoping for a new poem today, but my brain just won't wrap around the thought yet...soon though..soon.  Thank you all for the wings that have helped hold me up during this time, I felt the love even before I knew it was there.  Much love to you all.  These poems in loving memory of my mother.
© Copyright 2006 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-05-13 07:40 PM



These poems are timeless, Martie...
as are you, and all that you gift to everyone.

Happy Mother's Day, to you, and to all of the Mothers in Passions!




StevenS
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2 posted 2006-05-13 07:44 PM


An exqusite poem Martie and a beautiful lady as you are. Let your mind be a peace for you bless us all with your tenderness! Happy Mothers Day! :-)
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3 posted 2006-05-13 08:22 PM


I love this, and feel honored to read such a gorgeous tribute!
You do favor her, not just in face, but apparently, in heart's space as well.
Thank you for sharing this, Martie.
Happy mum's day to you.

icebox
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4 posted 2006-05-13 09:24 PM


You know I understand "mother" only as an abstract concept, but this is excellent poetry!

*smile*


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5 posted 2006-05-13 09:40 PM


How lovely to be acquainted with your mother through you--both beautiful ladies.  The family resemblence is certainly there!  

I'm glad to see you back, Martie.  Still sending thoughts and prayers for your recovery.

love,

cathy  

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6 posted 2006-05-13 09:46 PM


You are so much like her Martie..
and not just in the features..but the pureness of heart.
Thank you for sharing her with us.
Happy Mother's Day, with love, Nancy

Klassy Lassy
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7 posted 2006-05-13 10:41 PM


Dear Martie, thank you for sharing this.  My mom has been on my heart today and a very special aunt.  Like your mother, they left me a legacy of heart and soul....and footprints.  This is so beautiful.    (By the way, she is beautiful.)

Be blessed!

hugs,
Karen

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8 posted 2006-05-13 11:46 PM




"She left her mark within my cheekbones
as sure as summer her shape is mine"

Exquisite lines Martie. This poem played at my heartstrings. The picture is enchanting. She looks so fragile.

You are still in my prayers.


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9 posted 2006-05-14 08:23 AM


Great poem Martie and your brain will soon provide wonderful wraps and words - Love to you and Taylor - Paul
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10 posted 2006-05-14 09:19 AM


quote:
I see her in my mirror smiling
she shades her eyes within my own
and in the sand of summer’s footprints
she is not walking all alone




One of the most beautiful verses dedicated to a Mother I have ever read!

Dear Martie, your light shines bright. Be well!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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11 posted 2006-05-14 09:22 AM


Beauty can be a whole lot of things we vision beauty differently thats called taste
OwlSA
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12 posted 2006-05-14 02:12 PM


Exquisite, Martie, in so many ways - the outer and inner beauty of both of you, the beautiful words and images, the mastery you have over words, the reverent tribute, the poem as a whole . . . What a wonderful way to honour Mother's Day.  

(My maternal grandmother's name was Marian, spelt exactly the same way.)

You will soon be writing again . . . all in good time, our beautiful flower lady.

- Owl

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13 posted 2006-05-14 03:06 PM


You touch my heart with this write Martie,
and you touch our world here at Passions with your light!  

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14 posted 2006-05-14 03:19 PM


Martie - an absolutely stunning tribute and this -

"and in the sand of summer’s footprints
she is not walking all alone"

I do believe is an absolute truth.

It's so lovely to see your name here and I do so very much hope you'll soon be "tripping through the tulips".
Love
Helen

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15 posted 2006-05-14 04:16 PM



Martie, a touching and beautiful tribute- very well-presented.

Happy Mother's Day to you

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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16 posted 2006-05-14 04:32 PM


Happy Mother's Day Martie
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17 posted 2006-05-14 07:17 PM


Martie,
Such a gift your mother. Delightful that without seeing or knowing her we have a hint of who she was because of our understanding of you. Thanks for sharing again.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Magnus
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18 posted 2006-05-14 07:23 PM


Post every year will be just fine with me.
You write your love of her, likeness of
her so very well.

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